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Narrative
The reader wants a story that builds, peaks and lands.
- One main character, one main problem.
- Four beats: opening, build-up, climax, ending.
- Spend the most words on the climax.
- Pick a tense and keep it; past is safest.
- One or two scenes, told slowly.
- Plan for three minutes before you write.
Why it works, and the trap
Narrative is the container every genre sits in: a character wants something, meets trouble, and ends up changed or not. Most weak narratives spend three paragraphs getting out of bed and half a line on the moment that matters. Plan four beats on rough paper (opening, build-up, climax, ending) and give the climax the most words. Decide the tense before the first sentence and keep it; sliding between “walked” and “walks” in one paragraph is the commonest slip. One or two scenes told slowly beat a whole week summarised. The trap is cramming: a story that tries to hold a holiday, a fight and a reunion has no room to make you feel any of them. Try it: write the four beats of a story about a lost key, one line each.
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Personal experience
The reader wants one true moment and what it meant to you.
- Pick one moment, not a whole summer.
- Write what you felt and thought, not only what happened.
- Use the senses at the turning point.
- Say what you thought then and what you think now.
- Small true details beat invented drama.
- End on what changed in you.
Why it works, and the trap
Personal-experience writing is true, and it is marked on voice and reflection as much as on events. Think of three layers: what happened, what it felt like, and what it meant. Beginners write only the first, in order, from waking up onwards. Pick one moment instead (the first time you spoke on stage, the day the match was lost) and give it the senses: the hot lights, the dry mouth, the sound of your own voice. Then add the part that lifts the mark, the then-and-now: what you thought at the time and what you think now. The traps are listing the whole day and inflating a small moment into melodrama; a small honest detail beats an invented disaster. Try it: write five sentences about a moment you were nervous: one event, one sense, what you thought then, what you think now, and what changed.
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Diary entry
The reader wants a private voice, talking about one day.
- Start with the date.
- Write “I” and sound like yourself; contractions are fine.
- Choose one event, then react to it.
- Mix what happened with how it felt.
- Look ahead to tomorrow.
- Do not explain what you already know.
Why it works, and the trap
A diary is private, so the writer never explains what they already know: nobody writes “my sister, who is nine and called Anika” in their own notebook. It sounds like thinking: half sentences, afterthoughts, a worry that arrives mid-line. Exams usually give a situation (your first day at a new school) and reward three things: a clear event, real feelings, and a voice that sounds like a person rather than a report. The traps are writing a polished story in diary clothes, with scenery and full descriptions, and writing a timetable (“I woke at seven, then I ate, then I went to school”). Choose one event, react to it, and finish by looking ahead. Try it: write a five-line entry with a date, one event, one feeling, one worry and one plan.
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Descriptive writing
The reader wants to stand in the place.
- Use all five senses, not only sight.
- Choose precise nouns and verbs over piles of adjectives.
- Move like a camera: wide first, then close.
- One strong comparison per paragraph, not five.
- Let what the narrator notices show the mood.
- Avoid the inventory: a list of everything in the room.
Why it works, and the trap
Descriptive writing holds a place, a person or a moment still so the reader can stand in it. The beginner’s habit is a pile of adjectives on one noun: a big, old, dark, scary house. Pick instead one detail that only this place has (the smell of wet chalk in the corridor, the one tube light that buzzes) and let it carry the mood. Move like a camera, from wide to close, so the reader is never lost. What the narrator notices tells us how they feel: an anxious person notices exits, a happy one notices light. Use one strong comparison per paragraph rather than five weak ones. Try it: describe your school canteen at lunchtime using smell, sound and touch, and no sight at all.
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Dialogue
The reader wants speech that sounds spoken and does a job.
- New speaker, new line.
- Short, interrupted, unfinished: how people really talk.
- Use “said” most of the time.
- Add small actions between lines.
- Every line reveals something or moves the plot.
- Punctuation goes inside the speech marks.
Why it works, and the trap
Good dialogue is conversation with the boring parts cut. Nobody needs “Hello, how are you?” “I am fine, thank you.” Start late and leave early. Two people arguing about who ate the last ladoo are usually arguing about something else, and that hidden layer is what makes a line worth writing. Use “said” most of the time; it disappears, whereas “retorted” and “bellowed” shout over the words. Add small actions between lines (she tapped the desk) so the voices are not floating. The mechanical rules are marked: a new speaker means a new line, and punctuation goes inside the speech marks, as in “I’m not going,” she said. Try it: write six lines in which a brother asks his sister for money and she never says yes or no.
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Openings & endings
The reader wants a first line that pulls and a last line that lands.
- Open in the middle: action, voice or a strange detail.
- Skip “One day…”, “I woke up…” and the weather.
- Raise a question in line one.
- End on an image or an action, not a lecture.
- Echo the first line in the last.
- Never “and then I woke up”.
Why it works, and the trap
Readers decide within a few lines whether to carry on, so open in the middle of something. Three openings that work: an action (The bell rang and Rohan was already running), a voice (Nobody warned me the dog could talk) and a strange detail (Every clock in the house had stopped at 4:10). Avoid “One day…”, “I woke up…” and weather reports; they delay the story. Endings are the opposite problem: stop where the change shows, on an image or an action, and do not explain it. Echoing the opening line is a reliable way to close the circle. The trap is the cheat ending, and then I woke up. Try it: write three different first lines for a story about a missing bus: one action, one voice, one odd detail.
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Point of view & tense
The reader wants a narrator they can trust.
- Decide first person (I) or third (he, she) before line one.
- First person: only what “I” can see, hear and know.
- Third person: stay close to one character at a time.
- Past tense is the safe default.
- Do not drift into present tense when it gets exciting.
- Re-read once, checking only the verbs.
Why it works, and the trap
Point of view is the answer to “who is telling this?”, and it decides what the reader can know. In first person you can only report what the narrator sees, hears and thinks; if she cannot know what her brother is feeling, she has to guess or notice his hands. In third person, stay close to one character per scene rather than hopping between heads. Pick before line one and keep to it. Tense works the same way: past is the safest choice, present gives urgency, and both are fine as long as you do not swap midway. The commonest slip is a story told in the past that drifts into the present at the exciting bit. Re-read once, checking only the verbs. Try it: rewrite one paragraph from “I” to “she” and notice what you can no longer say.
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Letter to a friend
The reader wants a warm, clear message that sounds like you.
- Layout: address and date, greeting (Dear Meera,), body, sign-off.
- Open by replying to something they said.
- One paragraph for each point the question asks for.
- Contractions and everyday words are fine.
- Ask one question to invite a reply.
- Close warmly and sign with your first name.
Why it works, and the trap
An informal letter is a conversation on paper, and the marks go to tone and to covering every point in the question. Underline each thing the task asks you to mention (describe the trip, say what you liked, invite her) and give each its own paragraph so none gets dropped. Use the layout your teacher expects: your address and the date, a greeting such as Dear Meera,, the body, then a warm sign-off. Contractions and everyday words are fine; slang piles and text-speak are not. The traps are formal stiffness (“I am writing to inform you”) and forgetting to ask the reader anything back. Try it: write the opening two lines of a letter to a cousin, thanking her for a gift and naming one specific way you will use it.
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News article
The reader wants the facts first, then the colour.
- Short, specific, active headline.
- First paragraph: who, what, where, when, why.
- Most important facts first, detail later.
- Quote people with a name and a role.
- Two or three sentences per paragraph.
- Third person, unless it is an opinion piece.
Why it works, and the trap
A news article gives the most important facts first, because readers stop when they have what they need. The first paragraph should answer who, what, where, when and why; the rest adds detail in descending order of importance. The headline is short, specific and active (Gully cricket ban lifted after students’ petition), not a sentence lifted from your essay title. Use quotations with a name and a role (said Mrs Rao, the principal), keep paragraphs to two or three sentences, and stay in the third person unless it is an opinion piece. The trap is writing it like a story, with the surprise saved for the end; news puts the surprise in line one. Try it: write a headline and a two-sentence opening paragraph for your school’s first cricket tournament.
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Speech
The reader wants a talk that sounds good out loud.
- Greet the audience: “Good morning, teachers and friends.”
- Open with a hook: a question, a fact, a mini-story.
- Three main points, signposted: First, Second, Finally.
- Use rhetorical questions and the rule of three.
- Repeat the key idea at the end, then stop.
- Read it aloud; cut any sentence you cannot say in one breath.
Why it works, and the trap
A speech is written for the ear, so test it by reading it aloud: if you run out of breath in a sentence, cut it. Greet the audience, then open with a hook (a question, a surprising fact, a two-line story) rather than “Today I will talk about…”. Give three main points and signpost them (First… Second… Finally…) so listeners can follow without being able to look back. Rhetorical questions and the rule of three suit speaking more than they suit essays. End by repeating the single idea you want remembered, and then stop; do not trail off into thank-yous that go on. The trap is writing an essay and reading it out. Try it: write the opening three sentences of a speech persuading your school to start a daily reading hour.